Looking into the crystal ball
The sun shines bright upon our days.
Laughter in the air.
Not a dark cloud near.
Fear is a distant memory.
For we leaped into our destiny.
At once I thought it would get the best of me.
I blossomed into more I ever thought I could be.
A flower in the meadow of simple seeds.
Those seeds were being nourished ,cared for and tended to.
For now I see the beauty in you.
The beauty that shines ever so bright.
The beginnings of a wonderful life.
Days of great purpose
Nights of great love.
Who would of known it all started with a tug.
Kristina,
ReplyDeleteCool vision board! How did you collage all of these images, using a photo app?
I like the images that you chose. Very powerful intentions are being set.
The only missing is the descriptive paragraph that is supposed to go under your images - just to explain what's in there and why. Take a second look at the instructions. I think you overlooked this part.
Your poem this week is great! The first half of it has a very fun and lively flow... the reader leaps from word to word, line to line, as if swinging on a vine.
I really like the line: A flower in the meadow of simple seeds.
Great line.
The second half of the poem seems to trump substance over flow. See if you could tweak it a bit so that the flow continues throughout. Get back on that swinging vine... and I think that your work would be impressively complete.
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